Oxygen deprived
Mind in a state of confusion
Dazed
Lungs drowning
Oppressed
Trapped under the weight
Slowly crushing her
Pain so deep
Excruciating
Gasping
As if to take her last breath
Cessation
Hitting her knees
Blood escaping from her veins
Like a waterfall
Her last resort
Feeling for a exit
A trickle of light
Low to the ground
As the heat is felt in the smoke obscured room
Surrounding her
Coffin like state
Heartbeat starts to wane
Insides desingrating
Screaming for a slither taste of air
She feels for an exit
Strategy
Last attempt
To escape from the suffocation
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hope you’ve managed to draw a breath lately ππ₯°
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Hey π working on it Mr Pinto ππβ€π
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well get to gettin’ π€£π€π
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Hope you’re breathing easier now dear one!! descriptive strung words!!! β€οΈ
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Thank you sweetie π as a poet you know that a single thought or action can send us into a slew of emotions and words…β€β€β€
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Don’t I though!!!! hugs…. π€π€π€
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Lol a poets hearts is full of words and there words full of heart β€ love to you poet π€π€π€π€
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This is sooo true!! AWWW Thanks to you!β€οΈ
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Hugs and love to you β€π₯°
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Thanks much!!!!
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I enjoyed the uncomfortableness of your poem. The fast pace and effect of your words had me holding my breathe.
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Wow i am honored π thank you graciously π
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Reblogged this on The Reluctant Poet.
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Hi love …trying to write between life and well life ππ thank you π
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Thanks for answering back so fast, Love! I’ve been worried about you? No news!π’π’ I know Mondays are bad! Catch up, Later???
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Sorry love crazy daze days …I am here alive breathing ..crazed ππ€£ yes later πβ€
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