
Staring into the darkness of the night
The forest illuminating from the moonlight
She ran, basket in hand
Not looking back
Surrounded by daunting trees
Blowing leaves
Whistling of the howling wind
Frightened
Lost
Weary from the fight
She kneels down
In her beautiful, pink, long gown
To hide the tears she weeps
Lost in the forest
All alone
She lets go of the image of him
The white knight
The love of her life
Whom rides his stallion so gallantly
Knowing the woman he desires the most
The beauty of her face that keeps him up at night
The one that would set him free
From the monotony
She stole his heart
Right from the start
Lost in the forest
Doubt
Trepidation
Hesitation
The breaking of two special hearts
Will the knight capture her kiss again
Or will she blow him a kiss goodbye
With the whispering of the wind
Tattered and torn gown
She lies on the ground
The princess cries
Hoping it is not goodbye
The knight falls from his horse
In remorse and regret
xoxo
Copyright Β© 2019 Nichole Sulpizio
All Rights Reserved
Beautiful
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Thank you so very much! ππ
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And thank you for the for the nice comment much appericated!!
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Beautifully poignant – is their love unrequited or did he ravish her? π
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Not sure of the ending but I think I like the idea of ravishing her that just seems the point I mean she is a beautiful princess..who can resist that dont you agree? ππ
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Love this β₯οΈ!!
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Thank You so much!! π xoxo that means a lot
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Great emotional .
Kepp writing what you feel well!
XOXO
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Aww thanks I appreciate the nice comment!.π xoxo I thought this one was a good one
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You are welcome at anytime.
Keep writing !
You are cute.
XXOXXO
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Awww… thank you! π π I am so glad the writing is liked! I stared to write poetry at 17/ 18 I never did anything with it this is the first time expressing myself! The feedback has been positive I am so humbled and grateful xoxo
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Emailed you now .
XXXOXXX
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Oh okay will check shortly xoxo
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WELL
XXXOXXX
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I really like the line βSurrounded by daunting trees.β, it really sets the scene and makes the tension palpable.
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Thank you! I wanted the trees to sound intimidating. I appreciate the feedback so very much!! ππ
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Your welcome.
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